Thursday 4 November 2010

Post-Crit 04 _Open Crit

[i couldn't help re-touching it again...]

Representing Familiar Unfamiliar Spaces from Vivian Cheung on Vimeo.


Constructing Spaces from Vivian Cheung on Vimeo.


_feedback & self-evaluation:
. don't over-simplify drawings . be explicit about the intention
. spatially sophisticated [film] . should be shown on drawings
. i like the infinite variety of [connection in between] spaces
. verbal presentation: talk straight-forwardly
. figures fading in/out needs improvement
. keep the fun/positive spirit
. what is reality? the whole picture is never the reality.
. the transition in between is the key - push it further
. [film01] reason/logic for every shot - figures controlling the camera - convincing
. [film02] the overlaying of sound inside the building bringing back the prior spaces - nice
. abstract but recognizable - nice
. the object [distorted/rotated] becoming a practice landscape shall be carried forward
. personalize the project

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